Lisa F

Berlin

Associate Marketing Manager at Inkitt. You can reach me at lisa@inkitt.com

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A great read

I love this story because of its originality and wit, and the way it juxtaposes absurd humor with darker themes. The story structure is well-plotted, but occasionally undermined by the narrative voice. A first person omniscient narrator (Kev from the future) will sometimes interrupt the thoughts of Kev in the present, usually in a single run-on sentence. But it's nothing a bit of editing can't fix.

Overall, I loved this.

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